Friday, September 19, 2008

I will Graduate in the year 2012

Mr. Romero, this is my essay on me Graduating in 2012 I want you to grade me on my my voice and Transitions!!!

Do you remember your or anybody else’s graduation day? Well 10 years from now I will! Mainly because I’m graduating from constitution high school. I will be talking about how my amazingly strong family will help me through the high school experience, since I am the youngest. Then I will be explaining how my incredible smart teachers will “coach” us into an excellent academic career. Lastly I will be walking you through the ways my ubiquitous friends will help me through the high school experience.

Obviously the first group of people that will help me through to graduate is my FAMILY! Some of the ways that they could help me is by helping me with my homework, everyone in my family always says “If you need help on school work you can always come to me.” And other issues such as rides to school, I hate taking septa every single morning and every single afternoon, I could really have a ride home at least. I think my family is one of the most fortunate families in the country.

On the other hand there’s also my most experienced and intelligent persons I know. My teachers are like coaches on sports teams, such as basketball, the coach doesn’t dribble the ball for you he just tries to teach you how to do it correctly. Just like with teachers, the don’t take tests for you they show you how to take one. They could also help with outside issues to such as If I needed some help with English but Mr. Romero wasn’t here Mr. Brasof would probably be one of the first ones and try to help me.

Nevertheless my friends would be one of the main ones riding me about my school work when I’m at home. That’s not even a bad thing because say you had an essay due at 11:59pm, and you were finishing it around 11:45 the would be right on top of you making sure I got it done on time and it was all correct and it all made since. My friends would be an awesome help on helping me with school.

In final consideration you can see that I will be graduating in 2012 from constitution high school. I promise you mow. Not only do I have to graduate in 2012 I’m making it a life goal to succeed and get along in life. And one of the only ways I can do hat is to graduate from constitution high School. SO I will be a a grade student because of my friends, family and my wonderful teachers.