Wednesday, September 24, 2008

What I liked about thank you M'am

Mr. Romero I would like for you to grade me on my intro and details

Have you ever read or heard of ‘Thank you            M’am”? Well in fact it is a very good story that takes place in Harlem, New York. That has many up and down issues in it. It is called the climax. Some of the most amazing parts were- one when Roger tried to steal Mrs. Jones pocket book, and second is when he was “ baptized” and three is when he had a chance to run but he didn’t. ENJOY!

 

No doubt one of the most important parts of climax in this story is when roger tries to take Mrs. Jones pocketbook. It was interesting because it was a failure. As soon as Roger tries to take her purse he trips and quickly she grabs him by his shirt and says, “Pick up my pocketbook, boy, and give it here.” She leans over enough so he can pick it up and give it to here rite away.

 

However when Mrs. Jones orders roger to wash his face is another absorbing climax. Before, when they were walking to her house she says, “You know, I gotta great mind to wash your face for you.” And then when they get home she tells Roger to wash his face. And when he does it is like a baptism he is like a new person starting all over again.

Nevertheless one of the most gripping climax’s is when roger is finished “baptizing” himself, he sees her pocketbook, but instead of trying to steal it again, he sits as far away from it as possible. Then he sees the door and thinks about running, but he thinks again. He doesn’t because like it was said he is like a new person.  

 

            Indeed there were many climaxes in the story and as you can tell, the climax is the best part. So I hope you enjoyed thank you m’am.